The sky was clear blue,Until the clouds drew.
Blocking rays here and there,
Painting grey everywhere.
The clouds collide
Emitting a lightning spark,
They rebounded,
Leaving a scar mark!
Tears like rain,now,pouring down
All over the place of the town,
Images become vaguer and vaguer,
Till the eyelids come closer and closer,
Feeling the piercing pain
Of every rain,Painting grey everywhere.
The clouds collide
Emitting a lightning spark,
They rebounded,
Leaving a scar mark!
Tears like rain,now,pouring down
All over the place of the town,
Images become vaguer and vaguer,
Till the eyelids come closer and closer,
Feeling the piercing pain
At last I realize
Everything's in vain!If only the rain stops forever,
No clouds blocking the rays ever,If only there would be a time-tuner,
I would have made the lightning fainter!But now that clouds roar,
Rains falling even more,No one even tries to say,
That there can be a way.The plants have drooped down
They can't take it anymore,The birds on the roof
Shivering even more.But the clouds show no mercy,
Like there'll be no ecstasy!They'll collide and rebound --
That's what said by the thunder sounds.
Rain will fall,until eyes fall,That's what said by the thunder sounds.
Clouds rumble until we crumble,
Clear sky will never be seen,Unless I drink life to its lees.
3 comments:
It's beautiful as again. This one is unique as people can relate to it in their own ways because of its imagery. The scenery could be pain, failure, suffering, isolation, and so many more.
There are quite a few typos and some lines can be improved, for eg. "closer and closer" and things like that.
awesum..........strt writin a book yaar........pinky
well, good in a sense, it's a nice way of relating things to nature... but pain again... my friend, what people of our age face is not even a drop in the vast ocean of sorrow... think of the mother who lost her child in the army... she is in a terrible pain... it's a nice piece if poetry, i wont deny that... but a bit of positivity is good for you... good luck...
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